tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-42121032900231871512024-02-20T17:23:03.423-05:00A Writer's WingsTips and hints for the avid writer in any stage of writing.Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.comBlogger104125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-90761420849904246532013-06-21T15:38:00.000-04:002013-10-20T20:20:41.201-04:00Blog has been moved to WordpressAfter much deliberation, I have decided to move my blog to <a href="http://cynthiagriffin.wordpress.com/">Wordpress</a> to better personalize my blog. I will keep this blog up for a few months, but there will be no new posts. My new URL will be <a href="http://cynthiagriffin.wordpress.com/">http://cynthiagriffin.wordpress.com/</a>. I apologize for any inconvenience.Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com7tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-7780983077401804332013-06-04T16:31:00.000-04:002013-06-04T16:34:26.943-04:00Short Story Review: Captive Girl By Jennifer Pelland<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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I don't normally review short stories on my blog simply because I read so many of them that taking the time to do a review for each story would leave no time for writing my novel, but <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Captive-Girl-ebook/dp/B009CDXW24/ref=cm_cr_pr_product_top">Captive Girl</a> by <a href="http://www.jenniferpelland.com/">Jennifer Pelland</a> was such an amazing read, I couldn't help taking the time to do this post. Yeah, the story is that good, and so felt the strong need to share.<br />
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Captive Girl is a science fiction short story, but not like most science fiction stories I've ever read. It has a fresh slant to the age old story of sacrifice, duty, and love. Alice makes great personal sacrifices in order to protect her world from an impending threat from the skies. Her life choice leaves her in physical pain and a mutilated distortion of what she once had been, but all for the greater good, or so she thinks. Even as Alice carries out her heavy burden of duty, she longs for the thing she can never have; Love, acceptance, and a physical connection with another human. Be prepared for an incredibly emotional journey of heart wrenching sacrifice that will leave you asking yourself... What would you do for love?<br />
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<a name='more'></a> If you like well developed characters and emotionally charged stories, this is something to check out. You don't even need to be a science fiction lover to enjoy it. The best part, <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Captive-Girl-ebook/dp/B009CDXW24/ref=cm_cr_pr_product_top">Captive Girl </a>is running a free promotion on <a href="http://www.amazon.com/">Amazon</a>, so now is the chance to get it. Check it out and see what you think. Based on this one story, I have personally fallen in love with Jennifer Pelland's writing and look forward to reading more of her work.<br />
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Want to read more Jennifer Pelland too? Check out her <a href="http://www.jenniferpelland.com/">website</a> to find her work, or go to <a href="http://www.apex-magazine.com/">Apex</a><a href="https://www.blogger.com/null"> Publications</a>. Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com23tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-5032810729660089652013-04-14T12:45:00.000-04:002013-04-14T12:47:18.103-04:00Setting Goals and Keeping BusyIt's been a long while since I've posted that's mostly due to the fact I have been spending all of my time on different writing projects these last few months. In fact, I've barely had a chance to catch my breath. This all has transpired, because I'm trying to set realistic goals for myself and reach them.<br />
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My goals for March were...<br />
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<li>Start and finish 2 new short stories</li>
<li>Complete the 2nd draft for Part 1 of Blood Feud (prologue- chapter 12)</li>
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Which I managed to do. Yay! For me!<br />
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My goals for April<br />
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<li>Start a new short story for June Anthology</li>
<li>Complete the 2nd draft for Part 2 of Blood Feud (chapters 13- 29)</li>
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So far it's looking promising. First draft of short story (Ulave) is complete, and I'm currently on chapter 18 on my novel. The rest of the chapters should go much faster since I've already added all the new scenes.<br />
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My goals for May<br />
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<li>Complete short story for June Anthology (Ulave)</li>
<li>Start and finish short story for a Creature Feature Anthology</li>
<li>Complete the 3rd draft of Part 3 of Blood Feud (chapters 30-48)</li>
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Tough but doable goals if I stick at it and write everyday. I really enjoy setting these goals and feel a great sense of accomplishment when I reach them, but if I don't reach them I still feel fulfilled because I made the effort. So what are your goals for April and May?<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-4871439800324429722013-02-26T13:17:00.001-05:002013-02-26T13:17:43.943-05:00Book Spotlight: Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook<a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiBJUcMLsDFYIJlnU500Q-texcWj4-rDERrA1ILgSFC2nL8efjQ6AvnpRtiDC7gHZDC7FG1OhI9dq1AJ3gLCJU-w8HVj_8Up736UMgeM5w51Cys4__-kw1o-gU35g2kb17irJyWZcfkx8lD/s1600/Writing-the-Breakout-Novel-Workbook.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" height="320" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiBJUcMLsDFYIJlnU500Q-texcWj4-rDERrA1ILgSFC2nL8efjQ6AvnpRtiDC7gHZDC7FG1OhI9dq1AJ3gLCJU-w8HVj_8Up736UMgeM5w51Cys4__-kw1o-gU35g2kb17irJyWZcfkx8lD/s320/Writing-the-Breakout-Novel-Workbook.jpg" width="247" /></a>I recently was told about <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Writing-Breakout-Novel-Workbook-Donald/dp/158297263X/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1361902042&sr=1-3&keywords=writing+the+breakout+novel">Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook</a> by <a href="http://writerunboxed.com/don/">Donald Mass</a> and decided to order a copy and give it a shot. Wow! What a difference it has made in the way I approach a story. This book is a wonderful way to help work out the character and plot kinks of a novel, but it is also very helpful with short stories as well.<br />
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This book is sectioned off into three parts Part 1: Character Development, Part 2: Plot Development, and Part 3: General Story Techniques. Each part then goes into great detail about each element within the categories. I love that Donal Mass has included a little "lesson" and follows up with exercises where I can input my own information, depending on the story I want to work on.<br />
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<a name='more'></a>I highly recommend this book to anyone serious about writing a novel, or writing period. I, for one, give it huge points just for helping me figure out the tangled weave that is my novel Blood Feud. Thank you, Donald Mass.<br />
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<b>Note:</b> This Writing The Breakout Novel Workbook is NOT the same as the Writing the Breakout Novel. I have yet to read the latter, but from reviews, the Workbook is geared more to actively working on the plot of a story. The Writing Breakout Novel seems to take a more academic approach.Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-48936137187356899472013-02-01T12:20:00.001-05:002013-02-01T12:20:20.455-05:00The 3 Acts of Story Structure<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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In the recent writing workshop with <a href="http://writerific.blogspot.com/2013/01/jonathan-maberrys-workshop.html">Johnathan Maberry</a> we talked a lot about the 3 acts of the story structure. This workshop made me realize once again how helpful this little tool can be when plotting out a story. Most stories can be broken down to this basic structure and it is something to use as a guide when plotting out your own story. Let's break down the 3 acts and see what each act entails. I'll also use an example of the Wizard of Oz to show this breakdown.<br />
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Now it's true that the 3 act applies mostly to screen plays, but it can also be applied to most stories as well. Sometimes the acts are expanded to create more than three, and sometimes the first act is combined with the second act in stories, but using the three acts can help to show the skeleton of a story. It's a good simple way to make sure a story is on the right track to creating a coherent and dynamic piece of work. If you haven't already, can you break down your current piece of work and find the 3 acts of it's structure?</div>
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Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-11026084849705672312013-01-20T11:25:00.002-05:002013-01-28T11:36:42.926-05:00Book Spotlight: Dark Faith Invocations <div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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I am currently reading an anthology that I'm just loving and thought I'd share. <a href="http://www.apexbookcompany.com/collections/all-books/products/dark-faith-invocations/">Dark Faith: Invocations</a> an anthology of 26 stories with authors like <a href="http://www.timwaggoner.com/">Tim Waggoner</a>, <a href="http://www.maxallancollins.com/blog/">Max Allen Collins</a>, <a href="http://www.jenniferpelland.com/">Jennifer Pelland</a>, and <a href="http://www.facebook.com/tompiccirilli">Tom Piccirilli</a>. These stories test the faith and expose the soul as they delve into the world of giant Buddas, human machine robotnicks, a man renting an apartment in God's head, the cost of expelling one's soul, and so much more. Reading each story is like opening a brand new shiny treasure of deep characters, strong emotion, and beautifully crafted worlds.<br />
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<a name='more'></a>You can also join me and others as we spending the next few weeks discussing each story on <a href="http://www.goodreads.com/topic/group_folder/147032">Goodreads</a>. I've been enjoying the chance to chat with others about these remarkable stories. It's been a fun and enlightening experience as I get a chance to hear other people's impressions and have the opportunity to share mine.<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-30430635785491865872013-01-15T10:33:00.000-05:002013-01-15T10:35:38.583-05:00Ways to Get the Mind ThinkingIn my recent post <a href="http://writerific.blogspot.com/2013/01/writing-is-more-thinking-than-actual.html">Writing is More Thinking Than Actual Writing </a>I talked about how important it is to do a lot of thinking before putting any idea on paper. I don't know about you, but there are sometimes where thinking can be hard to do. So here are some ways I use to get my brain in the thinking mood....<br />
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<li>Walking</li>
<li>Driving</li>
<li>Take a soaking bath</li>
<li>Play inspirational music</li>
<li>Take a nap</li>
<li>Meditation </li>
<li>Exercising</li>
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-52209476098628601112013-01-12T10:29:00.002-05:002013-01-15T10:38:28.220-05:00Writing is More Thinking Than Actual WritingWhat is the most frustrating part about being a writer? I don't know about other writers, but for me its discovering a fabulous idea that I start writing on, and then part way into the story the idea fizzles, or I lose interest- So much for that fabulous idea. It gets tossed on that dusty shelf where all stories usually never get a second glance. After awhile, looking at the cluttered shelf can get more than a little depressing and I wonder, "Why can't I finish anything? Why can't I find a story I really want to write?"<br />
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Answer... Because I haven't spent enough time developing any idea to the point where I can really know it to feel it inside and out, up and down, and all the way through to the deepest core of the idea.<br />
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<a name='more'></a>I've noticed as a writer that the stories I spend more time thinking on always come out clearer and more fully formed. In fact, as a rule now I don't even put my story to paper unless I have spent a days, weeks, or even months pondering on characters, backstory, emotional motivations, and different possible plot lines. Once I feel like I have a strong connection to the idea, then I begin to write it down. The words flow and I can't seem to write fast enough. The stories have complete structure beginning, middle, and end. The best part is I feel a much stronger connection to the characters than I ever did just plopping ideas down as soon as they are breathed life.<br />
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I recently heard a piece of advice Ray Bradury gave a fellow writer...<i> "Writing is 99% thinking, and the rest is typing." </i>When I heard that quote I could only think, "Wow, if only someone had told me that years ago it would have saved me a lot of trouble." But then I doubt I would have understood that as I do now.<br />
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Here are some<i><a href="http://writerific.blogspot.com/2013/01/ways-to-get-mind-thinking.html"> Ways to Get the Mind Thinking.</a></i>Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-80069245077748710142013-01-05T15:02:00.001-05:002013-01-05T15:02:59.099-05:00Book Spotlight: Between the Lines <br />
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This book is all about honing the blending and balance of words and structure to create a superior piece of work. Some of my favorite chapters consist of topics such as; what to do about backstory, epiphanies and revelations, foreshadowing, and imagery. These chapters has already changed the way I approach my writing, and I'm especially looking forward to reading the other topics, which includes (but not limited to); pacing, sensory surround, and subplots. <br />
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<a name='more'></a>I love that this book goes into topics you can't really find in other writing books, and if you can find it, the topics feel rushed. In Between the Lines, Jessica Morrell takes the time to break down each topic until it's quite understandable. If you are looking for a way to give your writing that shining polish and deeper meaning, this is the book that will help you get there.<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-29664690473306972182013-01-01T05:00:00.000-05:002013-01-01T10:05:47.013-05:00My 2013 Writing GoalsOh man, I have to come up with more goals? Don't I already do that almost everyday of the week? And didn't I just kick butt with my 2012 goals? Okay, so maybe coming up with some new things to strive for may not be a bad idea. Here are some things I would like to accomplish in 2013.<br />
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<b>Read</b><br />
This is a goal I still need to keep on doing. I did better in 2012, but I can do even better. My goal to read at least a chapter or short story every single day. <br />
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<b>Write</b><br />
This I have been doing pretty good in, but I'm putting it down as a goal to remind myself not to become a slacker. I must write everyday!!!! <br />
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<a name='more'></a><b>Beef up my Self-Editing </b><br />
This is something I have been wanting to do for awhile. I have a great ability of finding plot holes, character flaws, and inconsistencies in stories, but when it comes to grammar, spelling, and punctuation I don't shine as bright. My goal for 2013 is to read a few books, and take a few classes so I can become a super editing machine! <br />
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<b>Finish Blood Feud</b><br />
Do I have to say it? Really? My goal is to have Blood Feud completely finished by the dawning of 2014. I'm nearly done with my first draft, so it has a possibility of happening. I'm going to keep fighting the good fight and see how far I get!<br />
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<b>Work on Short Stories</b><br />
Because I have thrown so much time into Blood Feud, my short story writing has fallen mostly by the wayside. I'd like to try to at least finish several short stories I have on the back burner, and maybe even come up with a few new ones. I can do it! I know I can!<br />
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<b>Do More Posts for My Blog</b><br />
I really do need to be more proactive at posting for my blog. I actually do have a list of ideas to write about, but I haven't taken the time to write them out. My goal is to try and post something every two weeks at minimum.<br />
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<b>Break into Travel Writing </b><br />
This is something that has interest me for awhile now. I'm not sure what it will take, but I would at least like to try my hand at travel writing and see where it leads. I know I love to travel, and I have several awesome vacations in the works this year. Well, see how it goes.<br />
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Wow! I'm already excited to get things going and I can't wait to see what happens next! So what are your goals for 2013?<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-56963499446826062742012-12-31T16:36:00.000-05:002012-12-31T16:59:20.411-05:002012 in Review: How did I do?I can't believe it's the end of yet another year, and what a great year it has been! I will always look at 2012 as the year that I really became a writer. I wrote more this year than I have since I started dabbling in writing six years ago. I also found an incredible story that will take many books to tell, and I found a really close group of writers to work with in the critique group I started at the beginning of 2012. I also did pretty good at keeping to my goals that I set for myself at the beginning of 2012.<br />
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My goals for 2012 were...<br />
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<a name='more'></a><b>Goal 1: Read</b>... My goal to read everyday.<br />
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<b>Did I do that?</b><br />
No. I didn't read every single day, but I did read most days. Compared to my reading in 2011, it was a big improvement.<br />
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<b>Goals 2: Write</b>... My goal to write everyday.<br />
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<b>Did I do that?</b><br />
Yes for the most part. Technically I did not write every single day. I did take a few days off now and again for family time, but for the most part I was writing every day. And when I did write, I more than made up for the times I didn't write. I found out something amazing too... I used to struggle to write everyday, but once I began keeping up the habit of writing, it was hard to stop myself from writing on days I took off for family and such. What an incredible switch!<br />
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<b>Goal 3: A New Path to Walk</b>... My goal to focus on writing instead of worrying about deadlines and publication.<br />
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<b>Did I do that?</b><br />
Yes and no. For the most part I did follow this new path, but I did break my rule on one story that I wrote for an anthology project, and I did attempt a few short story submissions. But as a whole, I mostly focused on the joy of writing. Oh, and I did set my own personal deadlines throughout the year so I had something to work towards, but I kept the goals flexible and didn't have a problem with moving things around if need be.<br />
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<b>Goal 4: New Niche to Write In</b>... My goal to write a bunch of short stories based of my childhood memories for myself and my son to enjoy.<br />
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<b>Did I do that?</b><br />
Yes for a while. Until I got my idea for the current novel I'm writing, I did write quite a few short stories based off my childhood memories. Most of them are still in rough draft form, but they are down on paper so that I can go back and work on them more when I am ready to continue that project.<br />
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<b>Goal 5: More Blogging, not scheduled</b>... My goal to write blog posts, but not have them scheduled.<br />
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<b>Did I do that?</b><br />
Yes. I did, and I look back to see that most months this blog only got one post at most throughout the year. I was so focused on my novel and other writing projects that I totally neglected this poor blog. I'm really not sure that was such a good thing.<br />
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<b>Goal 6: Learning the Craft of Writing</b>... Instead of focusing on writing classes, I brought some books to read to help with my writing craft.<br />
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<b>Did I do that?</b><br />
Yes. I did read most of the books I brought for the purpose of learning more craft, and also purchased another book <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Between-Lines-Jessica-Morrell/dp/158297392X/ref=sr_1_7?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1356989356&sr=1-7&keywords=between+the+lines">Between the Lines</a> by Jessica Page Morrell, which I found an invaluable source for novel writing techniques.<br />
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<b>Goal 7: Be More Flexible</b>... My goal to be more flexible in my writing, goals, and to overall be more calm about things.<br />
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<b>Did I do that?</b><br />
More or less, I think. I'd like to think I was more chilled out about things, but for a more accurate answer you may have to ask my family and friends.<br />
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I feel really great that I was able to keep myself on track all year. What an amazing 2012, and I can't wait to see what 2013 has in store for me!<br />
<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-34993218064763942562012-12-06T15:46:00.002-05:002012-12-06T15:46:34.307-05:00The Next Big ThingA friend of mine <a href="http://www.lesleyconner.com/journal/2012/12/5/the-next-big-thing.html">Lesley Conner</a> tagged me in a blog of hers and I have been tasked to answering questions about my lasted work in progress, so I chose to talk about my novel Blood Feud. <b><br /></b><br />
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The title of my current novel that I am writing on is call Blood Feud. It is the first of six books in a series called Emperors of Ethia. And yes, I already have titles and basic plots all lined up for the other five books.<br />
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The idea was actually formulated from a hodge podge of ideas, but I think the original idea came from one of my favorite television shows Prison Break. I fell in love with the character Michael Scofield and that love transcended into a main character for my series. I also have a huge love of the old Sherlock Holmes stories and that inspired my second character who is closely linked to the main character throughout the series.<br />
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Blood Feud is definitely a science fiction book that is jammed packed with adventure and political intrigue.<br />
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Ooh, good question. Well, since my main character is based off a character Miller Wentworth played, it would only be fair to give him first rights to place Adar Zahn. :)<br />
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As for Markus Nador... a bad boy type would work just fine. <br />
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King Rainus Nador... Sean Connery for sure! An older version Sean Connery not James Bond Connery.<br />
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Emperor Gharr Zahn... Ian McShane.. yeah he could do Gharr very well!<br />
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Zorren Zahn... maybe Gary Oldman, but a younger, darker version.<br />
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Tessa Zahn...Liv Talor, but younger like in Armageddon<br />
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Jarl Dexter... I'm not sure. I'm thinking someone unknown. Older, dark, and has that career solider look.<br />
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Just one sentence. Okay, let's see what I can do...<br />
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It's a story about the most disfunctional family you'll ever run across as a father demands each of his eight sons to kill each other for his throne, and the youngest son struggles to come to terms with a rite he doesn't agree with as he's forced to participate whether he likes it or not. <br />
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<b>Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?</b><br />
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I'm looking for an agency, but am not apposed to the idea of self-publication if I cannot find the right home. I realize that I am pushing the boundaries with some of where I take my book and that there may not a so called home for my novel. In the end this book is more for myself than anyone. It's a story I have always wanted to read, but have yet to see.<br />
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<b><br />How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?</b><br />
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I actually wrote the rough draft of Shadow Games (book 2), before I started on Blood Feud, but afterward realized I needed to start earlier in the story. I started Blood Feud in June of this year. I have 32 chapter written and have about 10 more chapters to write before I will be finished with the first draft. I hope to have a completed draft by the end of the year. <br />
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<b>What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?</b><br />
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I think my story is really a combination of a lot of books, but if I had to narrow it down I would say it's a Hunger Games meets Game of Thrones meets Star Wars kind of thing. <br />
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<b>Who or What inspired you to write this book?</b><br />
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I think this story was born out my own dysfunctional family. Let's face it, I had a really rocky childhood and my relationship with my family has been precarious at best. So I would say all the members of my family inspired me to write this over a lifetime of frustration and trying to figure out where we fit in each other's lives.<br />
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Also, my great love of science fiction determined the scene for the series. I always wanted to write a story set in a universe full of aliens, spaceships, and strange new worlds.<br />
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This book is set in a galaxy light-years away from Earth. It's a story that traverses the stars and planets of an Empire that's held strong for millennia, but that strength is tested from the turmoil of the politics inside and from the outside, as a strange alien race attacks Ethia's borders in random raids. <br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-8225213219404864272012-11-29T16:56:00.001-05:002012-11-29T17:18:41.434-05:00New Writing Group: Writers 2 WritersI created a Facebook page called <a href="http://www.facebook.com/groups/440337822669691/">Unofficial NaNoWriMo</a> in November to help out other writers who were participating in NaNoWriMo contest either officially or unofficially. I found that the support system was a lot of fun and beneficial to all who participated. I wanted to carry that support past November and decided to created a new Facebook page for that purpose.<br />
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It's called <a href="http://www.facebook.com/groups/296476553797709/">Writers 2 Writers</a>, and it's all about being a tool for writers to use as a place to recieve encouragment, chat about writing projects or anthing having to do with writing, boast on accomplishments, or simply join to help others become inspired. It's a place to scream for help when motivation is lacking. Show off your work. A place to ask specific questions about grammar, spelling, style, or anything else that may pop up in your writing. But mostly it's about being able to communicate with like minded indviuals who all have the same goal- to write.<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-39191076081986495152012-11-29T12:22:00.000-05:002012-11-29T12:22:03.820-05:00My December GoalsWell, my goals for the month of <a href="http://writerific.blogspot.com/2012/11/unofficial-nanowrimo.html">November</a> didn't get reached, but I came pretty close, especially considering I had to take about 2 weeks off due to different things coming up. I managed to get the first draft of Part 2 of my novel (chapters 18-27) done and I've gotten started on Part 3 and completed chapters 28 and 29. Since I wasn't able to commit the full month to my goals, I've decided to extend them into the month of December. My new goals will be...<br />
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<li>Finish rough <b>and</b> first draft of Part 3 (chapters 30-42)</li>
<li>Work on a short story connected to my novel for an anthology due in Janurary</li>
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I think my goals are doable, and I can't wait to see what the months of December will bring! So what are your goals for this last month of the year?<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-59248595776584478192012-11-01T11:37:00.003-04:002012-11-01T11:37:43.737-04:00Unofficial NaNoWriMoIt's November and you know what that means... <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/">NaNoWriMo</a>. Oh yeah!!! I am sending happy thoughts to all you wonderful souls out there gearing up for this great challenge. I too plan on participating, but unofficially. I don't have a new novel to work on, so have opted to work on the one I've been writing for the past six months (Blood Feud), so that means I won't be able to do the real deal. That's not stopping me from setting my own goals!<br />
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My goals for the month of November...<br />
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<li>Finish editing Part 2 in my novel (chapters 18-26)</li>
<li>Write the rough draft of Part 3 (chapters 27-40)</li>
<li>Do a first draft of my new short story Abyss</li>
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I know an ambious list, but I am confident I can do it! What about you? What will you be doing in the month of November? Will you be joing the ranks of anxious writers participating in NaNoWriMo, or will you join me and create your own NaNoWriMo challange?<br />
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If you do decide to plan your own Unoffical NaNoWriMo challenge, please feel free to join me on my Facebook page group the <a href="http://www.facebook.com/groups/440337822669691/">Unoffical NaNoWriMo</a> for support and/or bragging!<br />
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Good luck to you all!<br />
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Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-53370730733559572152012-10-20T11:21:00.001-04:002012-10-20T11:21:53.038-04:00Writing for MeI ventured onto my blog today to answer a comment a reader left and realized it's been nearly a month since I've updated. I seem to have fallen into a pattern of ignoring my blog and pouring all my time into my my novel and the several short stories I've been working on. So today I've decided to do a update about my writing and why I've been ignoring my blog. <br />
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Since I began the journey of writing with the goal of writing for myself instead of trying to be a published author (late last year), writing has become much more fun and exciting! The ideas flow much easier and I'm just a happier person all around. It doesn't mean I won't pursue publication, but I'm no longer writing to fit a certain niche or what I think people want to read. <b>I write what I want to read</b>, and it makes a big different.<br />
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<a name='more'></a>I have so many story ideas now I couldn't possibly write them all out (at least not with the time restraints I have now). And yet, I still continue to have spontaneous ideas popping up at the strangest times. In fact, I was trying to relax in a bath the other day and a whole story just developed in one whole lump from start to finish in a matter of half an hour. After that I got out, got dressed, and sat down to the keyboard. Two hours later I had a full rough draft of a 3,700 words story finished. Yet another example of something happening because I didn't force it. I wrote because I wanted to and it felt good. Real good.<br />
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The novel I've been working on since this past spring (Blood Feud) has gone much the same way. It's a story that I wish I could read, but no one has written it yet, so I am taking it on myself to do the task. It's been a fun ride so far. Don't get me wrong, writing is hard work- very hard, but the joy of writing the novel far exceeds the grueling hours and dedication I put into it. Crazy I know, but it's something I look forward to doing every single morning that I wake up. I might not be able get a chance to write on my novel everyday like I want, but I think about it and hope that I can find the time.<br />
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That is what writing should be. Something to look forward to with eagerness. Not something to dread or push until it hurts. I write for me. Sure no one may care to read what I write, but that's okay. My work may not be what publishers are looking for. I don't care, I write for me. And yes I've been ignoring my blog, because I have been too busy writing for... well, do I really have to say it again??? As long as I write for me, I will enjoy writing. So how about you guys, do you write for you? <br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-71796761700819487132012-09-26T12:13:00.002-04:002012-09-26T12:13:07.642-04:00Novel Management Software to Check OutIn my endeavor to write my new novel, I have found it difficult to keep track of all the little tidbits that encompass my massive story. I had been content to use a combination of Microsoft word processor documents, several handwritten notebooks, and scraps of paper with off the cuff ideas to be my artist pallet for ideas as the story unfolded. After awhile, chaos ensued and I realized I was drowning in lots of information strewn about every which way. I needed help! That's when I decided it was time to breakdown and start searching for some novel management software. I found three that were on my top list and I thought I would share.<br />
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<a name='more'></a><a href="http://writingoutliner.com/index.php">Writing Outliner</a>... This software is used in connection with Microsoft Word and it rocks if you are an in depth outliner. This program let's you plot out your story from the overall big picture to the individual scenes. It is completely integrated with MS Word to make it easy to input files you already have written! You can edit multiple documents at once with document tags, and can use different icons to set apart different types of files for better organization. It also has the ability to compile documents in order you want for printing or saving. You can go <a href="http://writingoutliner.com/download.php">here</a> to get your free trial. If you chose to purchase, this program costs $49.00.<br />
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<a href="http://www.ravensheadservices.com/index.php">Write It Now</a>... This software is great for organizing every aspect of your novel into one place. It has a section for creating characters, locations, events, and ideas. It has the ability to storyboard your ideas and create an individualized relationship map for each of your characters. The only draw back to this software is that it does have a little bit more of a learning curve, but the tutorials offered for the program are great in helping the learning process. You can access a free trail version <a href="http://www.ravensheadservices.com/download.php">here</a>. The purchase price for this software is $59.95.<br />
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<a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.php">Scrivener</a>... This is the software that I ultimately decided to purchase. I've been using Scrivener for a little over a month now and I love it! I love the way it breaks down the novel into parts, chapters, and individual scenes. You can use tags for easy organization, and put notes in files for later use. The compiling feature is amazing as it lets you choose scenes or chapters to print, or save as an individual file. I also like that you never have to hit the save button, because Scrivener saves everything automatically! You can download a 30 day free trial <a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/trial.php">here</a>. Purchase price is a reasonable $40 for PC users and $45 for Mac users.<br />
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It doesn't matter if I'm writing a short story, novella, or novel, after using novel management software, I see it as a great tool even for shorter works. The best part is that most management software will setup a manuscript template, so all I have to do is put in my information, and it's ready to send out for submission!<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-91702108007371078482012-08-29T05:00:00.000-04:002012-08-29T05:00:01.094-04:00Novel Chapters: Does Size Matter?In the process of writing my novel series, I began to realize that I was writing incredibly long chapters. Granted, I am still in the the beginning rough draft stage of my novel, but it got me to thinking. How long should chapters be in a novel? Is there a set length that should not be exceeded? Or a length considered too short? What is the acceptable length of an average chapter? I decided to do some research on this topic, and this is what I discovered. <br />
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<a name='more'></a>These questions really are answered differently depending on what sort of project you are working on. What genre is the novel? How long will this novel be? The best way to determine an acceptable chapter length, in the genre that you are writing, is to see what similar novels are doing with chapters. Suspense/ Thriller (page-turner) novels that need to keep the reader on the edge of their seats typically have shorter chapters. Science fiction, Historical, Epic Adventure novels that need more room for descriptive detail and reflection usually have longer chapters.<br />
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In the <a href="http://suite101.com/vickie-britton">Vickie Britton's</a> article <a href="http://suite101.com/article/dividing-a-novel-into-chapters-a33322">Dividing a Novel into Chapters</a> she suggests that most chapters should not exceed 17 pages and that lengthy chapters can cause the reader to lose interest, but as any writing rule, this is <b>not</b> set in stone. It really boils down to the individual chapter. The chapter should be as long as it needs to be to fulfill it's purpose. Once that is done, it's time to move on to the next chapter. If a chapter seems to be too lengthy, then it might be because of overwriting, or maybe there are two chapters combined in one.<br />
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Chapters typically center around one event or setting, but also can change with a person's POV (<i>A Game of Thrones</i> by George R.R. Martin). I like to write my chapters each like a collection of individual short stories. Each having a beginning, middle and end with the chapter ending at a crucial moment. Sometimes I end with a cliffhanger and other times I find the natural place in where one story stops, and then the next one begins with a new chapter.<br />
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<a href="http://www.writersdigest.com/author/brian-a-klems">Brian A. Kelms</a> puts it the best in his <a href="http://www.writersdigest.com/">Writer's Digest</a> Questions and Quandaries answer to <a href="http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/questions-and-quandaries/how-long-should-novel-chapters-be">How long Should Novel Chapters Be?</a> "Let your character dictate your chapter length not the other way around."
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<i>We’ll</i> <i>Meet Again</i> Suspense, Mary Higgins Clark 283 pages, 94 chapters, 2-3 pages per chapter<br />
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<i>Gone for Good</i> Suspense, Harlan Coben 339 pages, 58 chapters, 3-4 pages<br />
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<i>The Shell Seekers</i> Romance Rosamund Pilcher, 530 pages, 14 chapters, 15 plus pages per chapter<br />
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<i>Hill Towns</i> Ann Rivers Siddons historical romance 356 pages, 14 chapters, 20 plus pages per chapter<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-68149416376343543172012-08-15T05:00:00.001-04:002012-08-15T05:00:03.730-04:00What to do About BackstoryBackstory. It's the ugly red-headed step child that no one ever likes, but finds necessary to keep around. Like it or not, backstory can be very helpful in enriching a story and giving it depth that can't be done any other way. However, backstory also can be easily misused and become the anchor that pulls a story into a dark abyss of unreadable slush. This happens because backstory essentially stops the story cold. But don't fret, because there are a few things that can be done to help keep backstory from being said anchor.<br />
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The first rule of backstory... Only tell the reader what they need to know in <b>that moment</b> to understand the story. It isn't necessary to load a reader up with information that they don't need right away. Does the reader really need to know that the main character's father has been in a mental hospital for the last six years? Or that the main character's favorite team is the Red Sox? Or maybe the main character likes to wear cut off jeans and holey T-shirts every Saturday when he (or she) likes to go to their favorite local pub. Unless that information is necessary to the story right in that moment of the story, it should be come at a later time.<br />
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Here are a few ways to add backstory without hitting the reader over the head with the information...<br />
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<li>through dialogue</li>
<li>through narration</li>
<li>through "inner" dialogue</li>
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Make sure when using these techniques that it isn't being spoon fed to the reader. Spread it out to make it easier to swallow and your reader will love you for it.<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-10859726430847548632012-08-01T05:00:00.000-04:002012-08-01T05:00:05.092-04:00The Truth About FlashbacksThis post is another result of one of <a href="http://www.michaelknost.com/">Michael Knost</a> classes. I do highly suggest his online classes to anyone who wants to take writing seriously. Check out his <a href="http://michaelknost.blogspot.com/">blog</a> to find out more. Anyways, this most recent class I took was all about flashbacks (and backstory, but that's a different post). I found a few "light bulb" moments in the class that just had to share, but this post really is only the tip of the iceberg of what I learned.<br />
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The most important thing to remember... Flashbacks should <b>not</b> be used unless there is absolutely <b>no</b> other way the story can be told. Flashbacks carry a built-in disadvantage to even the best of written stories, because it stops the story. A flashback is about something that has already happened. It's over and done with so the flashback lacks immediacy.<br />
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<li>helps establish character motives</li>
<li>fills in events of how the original current story came about </li>
<li>fills in critical information that happened years earlier </li>
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If a story <b>must</b> hold a flashback there are 3 ways to maximize the advantages of a flashback...<br />
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<b>1. Time travel done right</b><br />
Every flashback should follow a strong current story scene. Flashbacks should <b>never</b> start a scene. Before dropping the past onto the reader, the current story must be established first; otherwise, the reader will become invested in the flashback and not care about the current story. <br />
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<b>2. Orient the reader at the start of the flashback in time and space</b><br />
Make sure that it is made clear that the story is moving backwards in time. Give a clear indication at the very beginning what is happening to avoid throwing the reader into confusion and frustration. There's nothing worse than reading a story and not being able to figure out where in space and time the story is supposed to be taking place.<br />
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<b>3. Use verbal tense conventions to guide the reader in and out of the flashback</b><br />
Conventions through verbal tense can be used to "signal" both the start and end of a flashback. This sort of thing is subtle and may not be noticed by the conscious mind of the reader, but is very effective in guiding the reader properly in and out of flashbacks. This is the best way to help eliminate flashback confusion.<br />
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<i>Example:</i> Let's say you are writing a story in pasted tense (that's my preferred style of writing). That means the first few verbs (usually the first 5 verbs) used in the flashback should be perfect past tense (had, had been). Then switch back to pasted tense. When you are ready to end the flashback switch back to perfect past tense for another 5 or so verbs. Once back in the current story, you return to using past tense verbs.<br />
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Are you confused yet? Here's a shortened version I made to help me keep it straight...<br />
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current story (past tense) + beginning of flashback (perfect past tense 5 verbs) + middle of flashback (paste tense) + end of flashback (perfect past tense 5 verbs) + return to current story (past tense)<br />
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What if a story is written in present tense? Then you would use past tense verbs instead of perfect past tense verbs.<br />
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Here's an example of a switch from a present tense story to flashback from Suzanne Collin's <i>Hunger Games.</i>..<br />
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"We don't speak. Our real interaction happened years ago. He's probably already forgotten it. But I haven't and I know I never will... <br />
It was the worst time. My father had been <span style="background-color: yellow;"></span>killed in the mine accident three months earlier in the bitterest January anyone could remember. The numbness of his loss had <span style="background-color: yellow;"></span>passed, and the pain would hit me out of nowhere, doubling me over, racking my body with sobs. <i>Where are you?</i> I would cry out in my mind. <i>Where have you gone?</i> Of course there was never any answer."<br />
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If flashbacks are used, it should be done sparingly. Flashbacks should never occur back to back. Strong scenes should separate each flashback scene.<br />
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There is an acceptable form of story that uses flashbacks to tell a story and that would be a "frame story". This story can be any length (from short story to novel), which begins after all the action is over. The protagonist or author announces that they are going to tell a story and may even give out the entire outcome at the beginning of the story. Example of this type of stories are <i>True Grit</i> by Charles Portis and <i>Water for Elephants</i> Sara Gruen.<br />
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<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-76579608085307672292012-07-18T05:00:00.000-04:002012-07-18T05:00:11.607-04:00Be a Mimic Writer and Enhance Your Writing Skills and StyleI have found one of the best and quickest ways to enhance my writing skills and style is by being a mimic writer. In fact, it is one of the most natural ways to learn the skill of becoming a writer. How better to learn than from the masters that have come before? In a way, it's an apprenticeship of shorts and gives a struggling writer the ability to get a deeper understanding of how the author manages to create a seamless piece of art.<br />
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<b>How to be a mimic writer.</b> The best way to do this is to pick a favorite author, or someone who has inspired you, and read everything they have written. Read like a writer. Pay attention to how the author is writing the story. Then take passages you like and copy them out word for word, punctuation for punctuation. Lastly, put the author's style into practice and experiment with your own words. I am not condoning plagiarism- far from it. What I am talking about
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<a name='more'></a>In the process of doing these four steps, you will pick up the style of the author and understand how their sentence structure works. You will also glean a deeper understanding of the basics of writing and how to properly use punctuation, grammar and spelling. It really is a win win, and will catapult your writing further in a short period of time than any one activity (including your own writing).<br />
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Naturally you can have too much of a good thing. I would not suggest doing mimic writing for a long time, or replace your own writing. Mimic writing is a tool like anything else that will help you learn the basics and give you a foundation to work on so that you can find your own voice and writing style. It's like learning to ride a bike. Once you get comfortable riding said bike, you can take off the training wheels and ride all on your own.<br />
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Check out a great article <a href="http://wordplay-kmweiland.blogspot.com/2011/11/4-reasons-to-mimic-mastersand-3-reasons.html">4 Reasons to Mimic the Masters</a> by <a href="http://www.kmweiland.com/abouttheauthor.php">K.M. Weiland</a> to read more about this topic.Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-58003569671852049662012-07-11T10:31:00.001-04:002012-07-11T10:31:20.697-04:00Using Body Language to Tell Your StoryI recently took an online class through my friend and fellow writer <a href="http://michaelknost.blogspot.com/">Michael Knost</a> on body language, and wanted to share some of the highlights that I found helpful. This was a topic I knew some about from other writing sources, but his class really brought everything into prospective for me.<br />
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Body language is essential in creating believable characters. It's the subtle things like a smile in just the right place of a conversation, or a small touch of the hand that can change the whole way a reader perceives a character. When you show a character through their body language, you are allowing the reader to size up the character without spoon feeding information that might push the reader from the story. The reader wants to feel intelligent as he or she comes to their own conclusions. It's the writer's job (you) to be invisible enough to help lay out the signs or clues that get the reader to where you want them to go.<br />
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55% of communication consists of body language<br />
38% is expressed through voice<br />
7% is communicated through words<br />
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Yeah, I was kind of shocked by the <b>only 7% is communicated through words</b>. Kind of made me feel small and unimportant with all my writing, which then made me realize that it's all in <b>how</b> you express those words. That's the key ingredient to really great writing. So my next thought was... how do my own characters express themselves?<br />
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There are 4 major ways for a character to use body language to express themselves...<br />
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<li>Facial Expressions</li>
<li>Gestures</li>
<li>Body Posture</li>
<li>Space</li>
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What are the eyes of your character saying? Is your character fidgeting from boredom or restlessness? Is your character sitting forward to soak up everything another character is telling them? Or is your character in someone's face for something that made them angry?<br />
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Also consider this... does your character's actions match their words? Readers will believe body language and tone over what someone says. If a character says they're open to a new idea, but crosses their arms or turns their body away, what the reader really sees is a character who is closed and rejecting the message, but not willing to admit the truth. This sort of "mixed signal" can be used to add to the character, or story. It can <b>also</b> take away from the character and story, if not done correctly.<br />
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When using body language it usually helps to build it up to a series of actions, because some body languages (like smiles, fidgeting, or no eye contact) can mean several different things. Writers should give about 5 clues within a scene to show context of an emotion (through body language) without coming out and saying it. This will help lead the reader to make his own conclusion.<br />
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<b>Body language is your character.</b> Make sure that that all body language is important, if it isn't, cut it out. Also get rid of overly used gestures, or body language like... she sighed or he winked. Find new or better ways for your character to express themselves. Remember that too much of a good thing can tip your hand to make the writer visible to the reader. Great writers disappear as their story comes alive. <br />
<br />Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-64374488517681539842012-07-11T07:35:00.000-04:002012-07-11T07:35:08.507-04:00My Writing ProgressI know it's been a long while since I've posted on this blog. I <b>do</b> have a perfectly good excuse. I've been writing like a whirlwind on my new series of novels. It's been a fun, but tiring process of getting the story down as fast as possible. I posted a blog called <a href="http://writerific.blogspot.com/2012/05/marathon-writer-riding-high.html">Marathon Writer: Riding the High</a> back in May, and well I've been riding that high ever since. I managed to finish that book (Shadow Games) and start on another one (Blood Feud), which I'm about 68,000 words into right now. The story is just huge with plot twists and events happening all over the place in my Universe called Ethia.<br />
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<a name='more'></a>It starts with a suicide attempt, leading to a kidnapping from Earth to a strange new Universe, then a ancient tradition called the Blood Feud, and it just goes downhill from there (ha ha ha... so loving torturing my character!). Right now the series (called Emperors of Ethia) is up from my original idea of 3 books to 6 and there's still more story to tell beyond that. If I'm not careful I think I might get a bit overwhelmed. Who am I kidding, I'm already there.<br />
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Anyways, after a week or so of feeling exhausted and close to complete burnout, I've decided to take a little break from my series and try updating my blog and maybe work on a short story. My goal is to return to finish Blood Feud after a little break, but we'll see what happens. Hopefully a little time away from Ethia might help me not feel so blah and used up.<br />
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I have a few ideas for blog post that I've been saving up to write about. I will try working on one today and see how it goes. It will certainly be a switch from writing about Adar and Markus (my two main characters), but I think I'm going to make my guys take a backseat today. So shut up you two and let Mommy work.Cynthia Griffin (Writerific)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05515179004681790253noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212103290023187151.post-27774512895287324092012-06-05T12:14:00.000-04:002012-06-05T12:14:59.372-04:00Advice from Slush ReadersWhat makes a good story? What are people looking to read about? How can I get people to care about my story and characters? And what does it take to get published? These questions have been on my mind recently and I ran across a few great articles I wanted to share and they come in the form of slush reader's blog posts.<br />
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<a name='more'></a>Slush readers, the bottom of the stack in the publishing world. They are often unpaid and work behind the scenes. They put a lot of time and effort into their work and get little recognition or monetary compensation for what they do. So why do it? Because of the incredible learning experience you really can't get anywhere else. Or so I've heard, and it's one reason why I've seriously been considering becoming a slush reader myself.<br />
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That's an entirely different post. Right now I want to share a few blogs I recently visited and the incredible information I found. Some of the information overlaps a bit, but read for yourself and see what you can can glean for your own writing toolbox.<br />
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<a href="http://saraheolson.com/about/">Sarah E. Olsen's</a> blog post <a href="http://saraheolson.com/2011/12/06/the-slush-readers-advice-for-writers/">Slush Readers' Advice for Writers</a> offers general and quite specific advice on what slush readers look for and pet peeves to try and stay away from. This reader works for <a href="http://apex-magazine.com/">Apex Magazine</a> and some of her advice is related directly to speculative fiction, but a lot is for all writing in general. She also has some advice for those looking to do slush reading themselves.<br />
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<a href="http://www.shimmerzine.com/2011/03/16/confessions-of-a-slush-reader-why-should-i-care/">Confessions of a Slush Reader: Why I Should Care?</a> is a post done by <a href="http://www.shimmerzine.com/authors/author-page-ferrett-steinmetz/">Farrett Steinmetz</a> . It's a humorous, but realistic look at the publishing world. Why should a slush reader care about your story? Give the slush reader a reason to say... yes. The graphics are hilarious in this post, but the advice solid. Why should writers care about what a slush reader has to say? Read this post and find out.<br />
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